Date: 7/2/2008 7:47:41 PM
Nickname: Observer3
Comment: Do not go into much deep english as you might know this is only wap and not an essay competition, you will loose your audience. Be specific and stick to the story, don use complex words its not appealing

Date: 6/30/2008 2:15:36 PM
Nickname: observer 2
Comment: Spangles you made a mistake in your last sentence.. you wrote one this site instead on on this site.. what with you being a stickler for spelling, i think you ought to know.. hmm

Date: 2/12/2008 9:27:37 PM
Nickname: Observer
Comment: I like the way you express yourself. Many, according to your guestbook, think that you're fake, for want of a better word. I, however, think that you're on the level. One thing though... although you've been to really good schools, your spelling leaves much to be desired. To truly project yourself, your thoughts, your persona, you may want to double-check your spelling every now and then. Having said that, may i add that i find your style of writing quite refreshing. It's a vast improvement on the over-burdened sms style of text which one sees so much of one sites like this, and many others.

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